Preliminary Task 2: Revisions

Throughout our music video various editing and feedback has been provided to my group in order to improve our video. After the class viewing, we received constructive criticism on what to change in our video. Some of these issues were the angle of the end scene with the commitment that we fixed and also the continuity of the switched cars and now only used one car. We also cut some of the scenes short to remove some of the stalled time in the video.

The first thing we fixed was the continuity of the cars in the video. In the moment we completely forgot but it is now fixed with our refilming we have done recently. We now only used one car with the same low angle in the scene though.

Also, the angle in the ending shot was offset and was to the left which did not follow the Rule of Thirds rule. We fixed this by setting the camera up straight so that all of us are in the middle and put the main focus on the main character.

Lastly, we had to cut some of this stalled time where in the scene it was just open space or for example this house that was in the scene for way too long. We fixed it by editing it more and cutting the scenes shorter to get rid of those useless parts in the scene. This made the scenes awkward also and weird so that is also why we had to trim the scenes.